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Website conversion optimization: fix the copy before the design

Six changes that lift conversion on a small business site, in the order they are worth doing.

· 8 min read

Websites Conversion

Most redesigns fail because they change how a site looks without changing what it says.

Here is the order I work in, and why.

1. Say who it is for in the first line

The fastest conversion win available to most small business sites is replacing a slogan with a sentence. "Excellence in service since 2009" tells a visitor nothing. "Emergency plumbing across Grand Cayman, answered in under a minute" tells them whether to keep reading.

If your hero could sit on a competitor's site unchanged, it is not doing any work.

2. Put the objection above the fold

Every buyer has one blocking question. Price. Availability. Whether you handle their kind of job. Most sites bury the answer on page four, and the visitor leaves rather than digs.

Answer it early. You will lose some enquiries you were never going to close, and gain the ones that were quietly disqualifying you.

3. One next step per screen

A page with four competing calls to action has none. Pick the single action you want and repeat it. Book a call, or request a quote, or ring the number. Not all three, in different colours.

4. Proof that survives a sceptic

Logos prove nothing. A five-star average with no names proves nothing.

What works is specific: the job, the constraint, the outcome, attributed to a real person. One believable case beats twenty anonymous stars.

If you do not have that yet, say less rather than inventing it. Fabricated proof is a regulatory problem and, in a market this small, a reputational one.

5. Make the form shorter than you want

Every field costs you completions. Ask for what you genuinely need to have a first conversation, then get the rest on the call.

Name, email, and one open question about the problem will out-convert a nine-field intake form almost every time.

6. Then, and only then, make it fast and make it pretty

Performance matters. Design matters. But they multiply whatever the copy is already doing. Multiply a weak message by a fast, beautiful site and you get a weak message delivered quickly.

Design is how the argument feels. Copy is whether there is an argument.

How to know it worked

Instrument the site on day one. Form submissions, calls started, booking page views, and which pages precede a conversion.

Without that, you are redesigning on taste. With it, you can see which of these six changes moved the number, and do more of that one.

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